Sudden Lights and Dark Tunnels

My first Poem of many....

When the sudden light comes, 

Towards you at the end of a tunnel;

a tunnel many years long and wide,

Embrace the light, for it is unavoidable.

It comes, do not hate, for this is your end.

Bless the time you have gained and curse

That time that has been wasted or disposed.

Rage the man who caused you this death,

For he will end up on the other side of the wall.

The wall divides joyous affection and dark hatred,

A wall that divides the good and bad, the loved and hated.

And when we are divided by that wall, dont wish differently,

That you could have done everything differently,

For this is the way it is, and the way it'll stay.

When the sudden light comes, 

Towards you at the end of a tunnel;

a tunnel many years long and wide,

Embrace the light, for it is unavoidable.

Author's Note

I think the rhythm of the poem is bad, but please tell me if its good. i wrote this in like 4Th. grade so it isnt my best.

Reviews

[Amanda]

I like the second stanza the best, nice job

[Michael Costello]

PLEASE COMMENT!