Mirror

We are a collective mirror 
reflecting 
    narrow perceptions 
from a point of view 
within the growth of forgiving. 
Without an outlet to define us, 
we stagnate and serve 
ourselves plates of 
         disappointments. 
Visions erupt inside 
                 out thoughts 
about the world divided 
             into different names. 
Images of other gods 
          are prolific in 
                our collective 
 sense of awareness. 
We are not able to 
         emerge as butterflies. 
We are not capable of 
           becoming actualized. 
The mirror does not exist. 
There is nothing to reflect.

Reviews

[Hoosier Belle]

I think the last 6 lines had the most impact on me. I enjoyed this write. So well written. Brillant wonderful write.

[TawnyBlueStar]

another great poem :D
'Visions erupt inside out thoughts about the world divided into different names. Images of other gods are prolific in our collective sense of awareness.'
love it :)

[Groovy]

good write

[Boldpen]

Another enlightening work!!!!!!
We are collective mirrors indeed.
and the grasping tone and words of this piece, just stole my soul away.
Truly a thoughtful read and wonderful write.