made me think of Phenomenon...and Travolta's line when he asks kyra sedgwick if she would love him for the rest of his life...and her response is "No, i will love you for the rest of mine."
really good stuff here and such a change of pace from the other i read from you, you are quite versatile with your style and words.
jacob
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
I loved that movie, and Poe as well!
Yes, everywhere for always.
This is .. read moreI loved that movie, and Poe as well!
Yes, everywhere for always.
This is quite a bit different from the others I've posted here, but it's probably the easiest in style and structure for me. A very simple piece, but I so love simple. Was actually written for someone, and there's a rather complex story tucked between those simple lines.
Thank you very much for so much of your time, Jacob. I honestly appreciate it.
made me think of Phenomenon...and Travolta's line when he asks kyra sedgwick if she would love him for the rest of his life...and her response is "No, i will love you for the rest of mine."
really good stuff here and such a change of pace from the other i read from you, you are quite versatile with your style and words.
jacob
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
I loved that movie, and Poe as well!
Yes, everywhere for always.
This is .. read moreI loved that movie, and Poe as well!
Yes, everywhere for always.
This is quite a bit different from the others I've posted here, but it's probably the easiest in style and structure for me. A very simple piece, but I so love simple. Was actually written for someone, and there's a rather complex story tucked between those simple lines.
Thank you very much for so much of your time, Jacob. I honestly appreciate it.
And another poem of absolute wonderful meter, and rhyme.....a wonderful write of love. I can almost hear you telling it to the whole world, all the way across the emerald seas!
Lovely!!!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you again for reading, as well as the wonderful comment! Am so glad you could hear it as it wa.. read moreThank you again for reading, as well as the wonderful comment! Am so glad you could hear it as it was meant to be heard!
Aw, this is so lovely; I love the idea of it reaching over seas and becoming just a whisper in the air, everywhere, just quietly there - that's really nice :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Aw... and thank you Emma, for reading as well as commenting!
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