The Path - #1

I wrote this Based on this picture. with a goal of a thousand words. i went a little over but here ya go XD

Running through trees, the brisk wind flowing through my fur. The earth beneath my feet driving me further. Empowering me. I could see a small white cloud as breathed my warm breath into the cold night. Morning was closing in and I knew I didn’t have long to find dinner and hunker down before the light broke through the forest canopy.  I pushed forward, I was getting closer. I could smell it. I slowed down briefly smelling something odd. Something I had never smelled before. I continued further. I had to find out what the smell was. Every fiber in my being screamed, warning me of the danger ahead. But I wanted to know, needed to know. What was I about to get myself into? 

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Reviews

[JordanIsaacSmith]

Fantastic piece of writing and great story. I'd have organised the sentence structure a little differently, but that's just me! I like a fairly complex sentence structure. There are a few grammar mistakes and a couple of spelling mistakes that I noticed. Other than that keep up the great work.

[Joe_VILOT_]

suspensful makes me sick the things "we" have done to this once pristine lush dense aerobic-process inducing dwelling for what could/can be generations to come.
well done.

[Andrea Mouser]

thank you! thats what the goal was of the story :)

[Arrow]

I felt so sorry for the soul in this tale. It makes me mad that I live in a place that was once an animals home.

[Andrea Mouser]

he was so confused. this little road will soon be his downfall of their species. sadly they do not know it :(

[wordman]

well I enjoyed this story

[Andrea Mouser]

thank you! i wanted to tell the reaction of the animals when humans began taking their home over with roads. blehhh XD

[Lyn Anderson]

Very interesting and engaging, and generally well done. The past tense of lie is lay "lay down"

[Andrea Mouser]

oh darn it! thanks for catching that i missed it XD