mmmm

mmmm

A Poem by Andrea Mouser
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lol im sorry im hungry

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i remember the way you look
the way you taste against my lips
the way you smell 
so divine
i cant wait to hold you in my hands once again!
just one look
send shivers
up my spine.
just one nibble 
send me into ecstasy
when i see you with another
i die a little inside
i need you 
i crave you
i want you
i dream of you
oh please
chicken sandwich!! 
wont you be mine?! 

© 2014 Andrea Mouser


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pretty clever....nice twist...you got me, and i enjoyed being gotten.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Andrea Mouser

10 Years Ago

im glad :) i like that its unexpected
lol, yeah u got me rolling on a roller coster for a chicken sandwich...lol. I thought of this lover you are dying for only to find out...a sandwich oh please..lol

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Andrea Mouser

10 Years Ago

lol i was realllyyyy hungry
NEVER apologize for hunger!..lol. So many ways to enter and exit this passionate quandary.
Well, first off..love the title as I also love the satire …but then, when I slow this read for a second viewing I enter the rooms of so many different possibilities. It is hunger in all its glory and that is what makes the simplicity of a "chicken sandwich" ( whether or not it is in fact a "Chicken Sandwich) the perfect gag for your wanting. But it is also that clever tool that makes you return for a second bite.
Great!
Now I am hungry….Thanks.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Andrea Mouser

10 Years Ago

lol sorry!! One bite sends me to my own personal heaven XD
And here I thought you were gonna say tuna.. sigh. lol. Very cleverly done Andrea.. er .. have any of that chicken left to share??? ;0)
~~redzone

Posted 10 Years Ago


Andrea Mouser

10 Years Ago

i never got one :(

i was just very very hungry, daydreaming about food.
Andrea Mouser

10 Years Ago

change chicken sandwich for any other food or person even to customize it XD

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Andrea Mouser
Andrea Mouser

Sacramento, CA



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