You Broke me.

You Broke me.

A Poem by Miah
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I wrote this after my ex cheated on me.

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 You broke my heart,

Including my dreams,

Killed my soul,

What next me?


I Loved you once,

But not again,

How can i trust you now,

Weren't we friends?


Look at me now,

Full of pity and sorrow,

Ah, 

F**k it,

I'll see you tomorrow.

© 2011 Miah


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The end was quite entertaining, and it is shocking how relatable it is. I have probably felt like this at least twice and in the end thought the exact same thing.

Luna

Posted 14 Years Ago


I liked that this had a sort of humorous tone at the end.
Well, it did to me, at least.
Like, you were sort of giving up and realizing that he's not worth all the drama and pain he caused.

I really liked it.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Miah
Miah

Panhandle, TX



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Hello, my name is Mariah but i go by Miah. I'm Bisexual and love Gay Pride day. I am not conceited, though at times i will pick myself over someone else like a regular person. I was born on April 18th.. more..

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