I am playing around with the idea of poetry, for I am no poet. I have yet to master rhyming so I know they do not have a good flow, but I am trying. I think it is important for me to keep trying and writing, so thank you for reading.
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MIAAAAAA!!! this is so beautiful and after we spoke today, i can feel the pain and heartbreak behind it even more. please keep focussing on your writing because there is true talent in your work. you have done so well and i am so proud of all that you are doing. this is definitely higher writing than other sixteen year olds produce and I am so glad that you wrote and shared this!
Any kind of writing can be a healing experience, as I well know. This, while being very personal and introspective, provides a wonderful positive attitude toward the future, as well as being just a tad bit terse. It is never all on one, for two are needed to "rumble." But, I do understand and commiserate with all the feelings here!
I like the sense of hope in this, that you may be broken but you will get through and the structure of the poem, in my opinion one of your best so far, loved it
My name is Mia and I am 16 years old. I do not know much about life or this world. I know that like most teens I am hurt, confused, and lonely. My poems are not professional, and most may suck. Yet wr.. more..