Love’s story

Hold me in your words

The syl-la-bles…coming �"together

Caught in your kisses

 

Sentences only make sense

In our love

Our story continues in the spaces

Created in the ellipsis

Opportunity in all that’s unwritten

 

I have joy in my heart

And you wrote it

 

Dip your quill in my ink

…sign in

And cover me in your words  

Author's Note

I really like this one, so I wanted to share it but I feel like it could be better…ALL help/ ANY ideas how to better it are most welcome and deeply appreciated…
Otherwise I hope you enjoy :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

This is poetry dear Mia.
"Hold me in your words
The syl-la-bles…coming "together
Caught in your kisses"
I love the above lines. The poetry danced to perfect ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Sami Khalil]

"Sentences only make sense

In our love

Our story continues in the spaces

Created in the ellipsis

Opportunity in all that’s unwritten "
This was soooo romantic and beautiful....:)

[Mia]

Thank you Sami! Glad you stopped by and enjoyed!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Lydia Shutter]

Yes, "cover me in your words" a sensuous line every poet will understand. So very romantic. A dreamy love poem. Lydi**

[Mia]

Hi Lydi! Hope you're well..thanks for the visit :)

[SyberRose]

Enjoyed very much...no need to change a thing...Rose

[Mia]

Thanks Rose :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is so romantic...i wouldn't change any of it...

it is a great mix of semantics and expressions of love...

we love with our words, often...moreso than physically.

we write our hearts to another.

[Mia]

"we write our hearts to another" I like that! Thank you Jacob!!

[toritto]

Mia - LEAVE IT ALONE!

If you can't like it as is then PUT IT AWAY. Look again in three months.

P.S. I like it as is.

[Mia]

HAHA! Thank you Frank :)

[Antonio Valentino]

you want to know how to make it better.. leave it as is

its your poem, not anyone elses..

your heart, your beauty..

which is the only way it should be written

this really is gorgeous

just like your spirit

[Mia]

Antonio you are too good to me...thank you my friend!

[Antonio Valentino]

you're very welcome Mia :)

[Frieda P]

OMG I love this one Mia...the spaces between, exactly!

Dip your quill in my ink
…sign in
And cover me in your words

Sigh..simply luverly....! Favorite................................

[Mia]

Thank you Frieda! YOU are luverly :D