Fluffy rainbows

I wrote the weird things I think down :)

I’m not sure how it started

Maybe you were yelling, maybe I wasn’t

Both equally as hateful, both meant to burn

I would fight with you if I cared enough

You would cover me in compliments

And you know, I know

They’re the sweet kind, soaked in lies

Remember that time when you were

Romantically in-love with me

I was too...almost

But I always loved you loving me

Now you feel like

My cold toes in wet shoes on a rainy day.

Water everywhere

Running down and chasing the make up

Into my eyes

You sting and I want to hurt you

But instead I’ll say

“Figure out how to have a threesome

With two people”

You’ll be confused and then

Ah...yes!

Rage, I've been waiting for you

Remember that time when I promised you

I’d be unstable, you laughed

Maybe because somewhere along the line

Everyone broke promises

Sometimes I hoped I would too

But mostly I didn’t

Not so funny now

I got the last laugh

It never reaches my lips

Sometimes I wish you would just leave

Then maybe I would stop you

Not forever, never forever

Just long enough to let you

Whisper kisses to me

I’ll make a new promise

I’ll promise to be a silly fool

Like the ones who dance on fluffy rainbows

And you’ll be happy again

Because once you were romantically in love with me

Reviews

[Patrick]

such an infectious piece of writing...those first two verses are so compelling...enjoyed the wet toes analogy a great deal.
The third verse confuses me slightly but maybe its a personal touch that I can't work out...
and then that title 'fluffy rainbows' - can these be sold, bought and eaten :)

loved it and im sure many more will

[Mia]

Only in my sweetest dreams can you buy and eat 'fluffy rainbow'. They’re delicious :P
There is nothing worse than fighting with someone who just doesn’t care. The third stanza is just that. She knows if she fights back, he’ll be happy that at least she cares so instead she says something completely random and out of place. She is fighting back without giving him the satisfaction and still getting the same result. He is enraged.
Thank you so much!!

[Patrick]

thanks for clarifying....:)
I might look on amazon for them

[Southern Cross]

Welcome to the ways a woman thinks P.J. Glad you're clarified now LOL

[Patrick]

clarified like butter..

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a depth to your words... the title rests on one field and your journey across love and life, moments and time.. all this expresses the richness of emotion and the world as it was... when there was the essence of romance around you.

[Mia]

Wonderful you, thank you for your time and review :)

[Southern Cross]

I loved the rhythm in this... the quirkiness was delightful and what a nice open door to voyeur into your relationship

[Mia]

HAHAHA! Not my relationship...goodness me...NO! I'm not that twisted :) I don't really know it come from...but I'm glad it did. Thank you, thank you...a thousand thank yous. Twice in one day...lucky me :D

[Southern Cross]

It helps to have multiple personalities LOL

[Patrick]

dont listen to her mia she's more sense than a jar of lime jam :)))

[Southern Cross]

I think you meant no more sense grr the Brits can't speak common English

[Belinda]

MIA!!! your poems are awesome. This one is amazing. I love the thought of fluffy rainbows. I would of never put them two words together. Pretty!

[Mia]

LOL! Thank you Belinda :) I imagine they would be pretty.
Again thank you, I appreciate your kind words!

[Castonovia]

Wow... fluffy rainbows indeed, thought this piece would be a merry, little poem, but I was wrong. So much raw emotions waiting to stun with both depth and perception. Deceit never relationship worthy... very dazzling, well penned write :)

[Mia]

Thank you Chelsea! Dazzling...I like that :)

[Castonovia]

Aha my pleasure, thanks for sharing it ;p

[JosephineDevolle]

Nicely written, so many of us stay in relationships with so many secrets, it's hard to explain, but I think you've put it into words.

[Mia]

Thank you :) I appreciate you taking the time to read this!

[JosephineDevolle]

Keep working at it Mia - you will get published!!!!!!!!!!!

[Mark]

Very different. Classic 'falling for the wrong guy' but penned in a unique style.

The title has a typo hon. :) enjoyed reading your work as always!

[Mia]

Thank you so much for spotting that, I fixed it :)
I appreciate you stopping by!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The complexities of love are endless... that is why it is tough to maintain a relationship. Excellent work.

[Mia]

Thank you kind sir :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

The avitar is a little suspect as it does not describe this poem of emotion and hurt and hope. Such a nice write!

[Mia]

Thanks John

[Sacsen Foote]

Hmm this is completely different from what I expected. This is a very tense writing. Lots of emotion/frustration in this. Very well done

[Mia]

Thank you ever so much :)