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A Poem by Mia
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It is the most frustrating feeling, EVER!

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Full of things to say

Must write it down

Must get it out


Stuck on the first letter

In the first line

Must keep going

Must work through it


Read around for inspiration

Someone help me free my words


My mind is full of things

Things....come on

Think of the word

Write it down


Letters caged inside my mind

The sound of their dancing

Threatens my sanity

It's crippling


The pain is unbearable

Need to find a way to connect

Silently screaming

No one hears me


No one’s heard me for a while

© 2012 Mia


Author's Note

Mia
I'm trying to work through my writer block.

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I love this poem; it expresses everything i have felt unable to articulate.
Should the 9th line be - 'Someone help (me) free my words' ?
apostrophe - 'it's crippling'
The fragmentation is perfect and the concept irrepresible - when writer's block looms, write about it! That's the spirit. I hope you're back in your zone. I've been detached from mine for too long as well:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mia

12 Years Ago

Thank you for point out my mistakes, I will fix them right away :)
Aaaaah, writers block the b.. read more



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I totally understand this! Thanks for sharing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Mia

12 Years Ago

Thank you for reading :)
Sadly I know exactly how you feel.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Mia

12 Years Ago

I think everyone on here has experienced it at some point.
I love this poem; it expresses everything i have felt unable to articulate.
Should the 9th line be - 'Someone help (me) free my words' ?
apostrophe - 'it's crippling'
The fragmentation is perfect and the concept irrepresible - when writer's block looms, write about it! That's the spirit. I hope you're back in your zone. I've been detached from mine for too long as well:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mia

12 Years Ago

Thank you for point out my mistakes, I will fix them right away :)
Aaaaah, writers block the b.. read more
I don't think it needs the last line..but it is something we all can relate to and you put it over very well indeed....I really think the last line should be scrapped!...Sorry

Posted 12 Years Ago


Mia

12 Years Ago

No need to be sorry :)
Dr. Wood ?

12 Years Ago

well..to be honest..i am not...and i am sure you know that...
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Pax
I know you can Mia...run...run as fast as you can...inspiration is not really that far away... look beyond your soul... you'll see the light...that shines bright... it will guide you through this writer's block..
good luck...

ps ... you did great in this poem.. a darker side of writer's block...fading into the darkness..

Posted 12 Years Ago


Mia

12 Years Ago

Thank you Pax :)
Your encouragement and support me the world to me. I am starting to see the .. read more
Pax

12 Years Ago

yes they are..you just have to see pass through it...lookind deep in the hidden meaning...Your welco.. read more
Writer's block is a b***h to all of us who live for the written word... I always say inspiration is never far away cause it is always in your heart.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Mia

12 Years Ago

The ties between my heart and my mind seem to be severed. I’m hoping it passes, SOON!
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

12 Years Ago

I hope so too.

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