Haiku

My first try at poetry... at any kind

A cold wind outside-

letter flutters in distance

lands on muddy pond

Author's Note

I'm not exactly sure if this is what a haiku should be; but I've made sure its in the 5-7-5 format and adds up to 17 syllables. I would appreciate it if you could tell me whether its fine, and if you could suggest any changes in it, please do so. Thank you :)

Reviews

[zephyr]

A wonderful haiku, I think.

[Saddam]

it is cool... Very nice one. It is not only good try but keep it up dear. Your hand is very light at this form and also with full of imagination. Love one.

[Anand Sehgal]

An artistic scene.... A curiosity grows !
Loved the write dear :)
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[Vaishali Roopesh]

Thank you very much for the lovely review :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

I think this is a lovely Haiku Vaishali :)

[Vaishali Roopesh]

Oh yay :D thanks a lot!

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Praveeta]

I love reading haiku and I enjoyed your creation.

[Vaishali Roopesh]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :)

[Praveeta]

You are most welcome.