Sun and Moon

Sun and Moon

A Poem by Serena
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Unrequited love

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He is the sun and I the moon

I whisper as I watch him shine brightly in the sky

Basking in his warmth

As we dance around each other

Waiting for him to notice me

Forever locked in a game of tag

 

He is the sun and I the moon

Out of reach,

Yet so close I can taste his laughter fluttering in the wind

Sending my body a blaze as I listen quietly

Waiting for the day he sees me

Forever locked in our game of tag

 

He is the sun and I the moon

So different yet, so similar

When will he see I am here?

When will he let me in?

For he is my sun

© 2023 Serena


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' Yet so close I can taste his laughter fluttering in the wind' That one phrase deserves a gold medal.. wonderful! From beginning to end you have said what you long to say face to face, over and over again.. Your emotions are spoken in a whisper but.. they sing too, Serena! Such fine writing. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Serena

1 Year Ago

Thank you!



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Despite sharing the same orbit, love was not meant to be.
Lovely poem.

Posted 8 Months Ago


He is the sun and I the moon
Very interesting
Nice poem written

Posted 1 Year Ago


From the way you describe him, I would say your love is more unrequited than unrequired.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Serena

1 Year Ago

I fixed. Thank you!
Enrapturing indeed, love never was more in need of return fulfillment as here between Moon and sun, but will he take notice of her outstretched, gleaming beaming smiles of admiration?

Stellar sunsational

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Serena

1 Year Ago

I’m happy you liked my poem :)
' Yet so close I can taste his laughter fluttering in the wind' That one phrase deserves a gold medal.. wonderful! From beginning to end you have said what you long to say face to face, over and over again.. Your emotions are spoken in a whisper but.. they sing too, Serena! Such fine writing. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Serena

1 Year Ago

Thank you!

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Added on September 23, 2023
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Few things about me: 1. I love poetry, and write stories when bored and nothing to write comes to mind 2. I have bad spelling 3. I'm a gamer and love anime/manga :3 4. I love reading and writing .. more..

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