I liked it, we dont even need you to tell us what it's about, there is great emotion portrayed here! I saw the word "red" and immediately my thoughts turned to blood. I hope your emotions change soon, it's not good to be angry for long, hopefully this poem has let all of it out of you :) I also hope it isnt you who's causing these "cuts" to you, whether they may be physical, or emotional. Wonderful poem to say the least, feel better :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
:) glad you like it. no i'm not the one causing the "cuts" lol
i'm a lot better since the poem.. read more:) glad you like it. no i'm not the one causing the "cuts" lol
i'm a lot better since the poem :)
I think you should repeat the entire "Red, Red as deep as the sea, Red, Red is all I see" in the last stanza. At first I wasn't sure how I felt about rhyming "sea" and "see" but I think you really made it work.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Wasn't trying to rhyme with the "sea" and "see". Just how it come out when I typed out my feelings
Few things about me:
1. I love poetry, and write stories when bored and nothing to write comes to mind
2. I have bad spelling
3. I'm a gamer and love anime/manga :3
4. I love reading and writing
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