Never Ending Game

Life is just a never ending game

 

Day by day,

You advance the levels, yet never win

 

Day by day,

Your life is out of your control

 

The characters fight the battles,

and there is never a winner

The gamers scream out in anger,

but you can never hear their warning

 

The Bosses increase as you advance through

 

Life is just a never ending game

 

The next generation gets tougher,

and the old leap into the darkness of GAME OVER

 

This life is something that none can ever win

Not even the best gamer in this world of reality

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Life is just a never ending game...
Well penned.

[Allie]

This is clever and thoughtful but the word game repeated over again is kind of redundant.

[Serena]

I'll look into it later on. Thanks for your view on the repeat

[Kes]

"This game of life is hard to play,
I'm gunna lose it anyway..."
Manic Street Preachers - Suicide Is Painless.

Great work! Keep it up!
K

[Serena]

Never will stop :)

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Great poem! Just one thing which even happens to me sometimes u wrote LIfe and not life but it doesn't really matter. Don't give up! 100/100

[Serena]

thanks for catching the mistake and the review :)

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you're welcome