Everyday

I am the Moon

That hangs high in the inky darkness

 

My screams of agony are never heard

For they are hidden behind my fake light

 

Everyday

 

The scars you gave me open

As the thought of you sends me under

Melting away with the nothingness around me

 

The stars fade away

Along with your love

The planets drift away from me

Just as you walk out my life

 

I am the lonely Moon

That hangs low in the inky darkness

 

My tears are invisible to your eyes

Just like how my light fades everyday

 

No one cares to look for how I feel

Just the beauty of my faceless surface

 

Everyday,

I scream to the heavens

And I go unheard

 

Everyday,

My loneliness grows stronger

 

Everyday.

I miss you

Reviews

[Maan]

Woah! It just simply blew me away. :) Brilliant write. Simple, humbly expressed strong words, excellent flow, a lot of little factors gathered up in perfection and raise the standard of the poem. Feelings which your words are expressing are a lot familiar to me but I guess I can't express myself this way. Loved it. :) :) thanks for sharing.

[Serena]

^ ^ anytime Maan. I enjoy when people like my poems :)

[Kes]

This touched a nerve. A very emotional write.
You're such a talented writer.
K

[Serena]

Thx Kes :)
I try my best to put a lot of emotion into my writings :3

[Fréyjä Helv..]

It's a depressing thought... Beautifully written. I feel the pain and loneliness u described... I can't help but feel the same way... sigh... :(

[Serena]

Then I've done what I was aiming to do. I've touched an audiance and let them feel what the reader has ^ ^

[Fréyjä Helvití]

Exactly... nice job... :)

[anxia]

Nice!

[Serena]

Thanks

[smexykitten3987]

nice it really touched me and made me think of past experiences :3

[Serena]

:) was suppose to