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A Poem by Trevor Bushey
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Lyrics to a song I've written. I embedded a rough version of the song into the text area. It's in its primordial stage of development. I ought to expand on the piece and give it some substance.

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I can't discern fear from foresight. 
I apperceive and do believe 
My fears to be recondite, 
But you know. 

You know. 

© 2013 Trevor Bushey


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Is this the cathartic write? It is customary, when one sends a PM shamelessly plugging their writing, to actually include the title of the piece being shamelessly plugged ;-)

As a song? Meh...who's your audience? I can count on one hand the number of people who know what recondite means without Googling it (raises hand...but I'm not a huge fan of this type of music) *laugh*

If you do expand on this, and, believe me, you should, because this is in no way, shape, or form finished, may I suggest you consider the sage words of one Mister Dick Clark: "It's got a good beat and you can dance to it..." That's all you need, baby...

Thanks for sharing this with us...always a pleasure to read you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

Caustic?? kimmer?? Never ;-)

Oppressive guilt, I actually get that from the few lines .. read more
Trevor Bushey

11 Years Ago

Must you be so condescending, stupid? I won't tolerate it. ;) As for what kind of music I am going f.. read more
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

Ha! As a matter of fact, yes...I must be ;-)

God you have no idea how much I wanted tha.. read more

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Trevor Bushey
Trevor Bushey

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A poetaster who primarily utilizes his capacity to write to pacify the pangs of his pragmatic conscience. Pitiful, practical, pithy. Will you appraise one of my poems? more..

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