heartbeats go

back arched

thigh muscles taut

she catches

in her hair 

the harvest moon

air wet

and coooool

face flushed

from the rush

she sucks his thumb

 

ocean

mixed with

sweat

mixed with

swooooon

 

heartbeats go

tap-tap, tap-tap

taptaptaptaptaptap

thump-thump

ba-boom ba-boom 

 

ba-bum, ba-bum

slowdown

collapse 

and sigh

night has never felt so wiiiiide

For the "Sexy Romance" contest.

Reviews

[conversations with her ..]

simply amazing....

its like i can hear the sounds too

I'm new on here, so it would be an honour if you could review some of my poems!

[Be myself!]

I love the use of sound words. It makes it more sensual and romantic. Amazing.

[-----]

Timidly sensual and thoughtfully igniting imagery of the night.

[Chris]

A good "afters"taste

[Yellow Butterfly]

There is an air of gaiety in your words as they cascade down the pages of your heart.....

This sure did make my heart go.... booooooooooom :o)

[Dennis A. Clark]

Great, thanks.

I can second that motion.

[Yellow Butterfly]

:o)

[vspjaguar]

I like the unique style in your poetry! especially tap- tap ba-boom, awesome :D

[Frieda P]

This is lovely and fun at the same time, put a smile on my face to read it. Nicely penned.

[Dennis A. Clark]

Great. An "adult Seuss" was my aim here.

[Frieda P]

haha Dr Seuss gets laid ;-)

[AYVID N]

Beautiful and very romantic. Also fun to read. :)

[Dennis A. Clark]

Thanks, Thinking. This one's best read aloud, I think.

[AYVID N]

Yes. It has a musical quality to it. And the tapping does it for me.