lying beneath the elm tree

light in the leaves

from this view

fires the sky

green-gold on blue

Reviews

[Clockwork]

This poem has the organic feel and texture of a Haiku. Although, I like how you add a dash of rhyme to this poem. I think it adds a bit of extra rhythm to the season you describe.

The poem makes me think that you are looking out a second story window into a group of leaves. Maybe standing in a forest looking up at the canopy.

[Dennis A. Clark]

I like your take on the imagery.

[AYVID N]

Brings to me a picture of green blue gold fireworks playing in the sky! The beauty of nature thrives in this haiku.

[falling_toxic_rain]

A different perspective of the world is always wonderful.
Poem reminds me that if you look at something from a different angle we can always fi.d something beautiful.
I love the peace and calming that this piece radiates.
Gus ks for sharing.

[Dennis A. Clark]

Thanks for your response.