2 - 1 = ZERO (Wondering)

My best friends Fiance` committed suicide, and he couldn't just make a song, everything he made wasn't good enough, I told him I would help write, he orchestrated, but, it I ended up writing this

A hole in a heart can leave a man dead, with that said / 

she wanna sleep on a King, but it's empty in that bed / 

he grabs threads of what's left what's next / 

how in the hell can you go on alone after that mess / 

nothing to hold but memories, what it could've become / 

he would die of heartache not of a gun / 

no, not of a pun intended, his heart was torn /

for by his wrist on his sleeve it was worn / 

love exists in the minds of artists that paint tragedy / 

even with an imagination the truth was more graphic see / 

he wanted to rescue her from the darkness of that apartment / 

his soul whole and ripped apart heart wrenched / 

he holds onto material possessions it's not good enough / 

he thinks of love as the enemy now, how could he love? / 

but this time he did, he did he really loved her / 

with her he was better, now with her gone he suffers / 

........wondering.......

Author's Note

This wasn't such a poem as it was for lyrics of a song, so very grammatically incorrect, it is hip-hop, slam type of poetry, and written for a friend from the heart, as all I could do was gather empathy as he wept telling me the tragic story.

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[Alao Taiwo]

2-1=Zero. just wondering too. it's nice