I Miss You

I Miss You

A Poem by MetalShopGurl
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A poem inspired by how much I miss one of my best friends.

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I miss what we used to be,

What we used to have.

I miss your joyous laugh,

Our endless talks.

 

I miss the way you smile,

The way you saw me as me.

I miss how you used to hold me,

How you used to comfort me.

 

I miss the way you made me happy,

Just by being there.

I miss the way we touched,

The way you held me.

 

I miss your scent,

The feel of your skin against mine.

I miss our happy times,

When you made me laugh.

 

I miss the feel of your hair,

Like silk through my fingers.

I miss how you compliment me,

No matter how terrible I look.

 

I miss you,

All of you.

Nothing can change that,

Not even our time apart.

 

Because distance makes the heart grow fonder,

No matter how far,

No matter how wide,

I miss you.

© 2010 MetalShopGurl


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It's beautiful, and something I can relate to so simply. Good job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


very touching. very...simple but open. keep up the good work and i hope to be able to read more soon.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I loved it, and can relate to the fullest.

Posted 14 Years Ago


:'(
Really sad but... One of the best in my opinion. Reminds me of how my friend and I am...

Posted 14 Years Ago



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