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Just a poem i wrote off the top of my head.

When u scream at me,
i feel the need,
but i stand tall,
and i stand proud.

i won't back down,
you won't make me fall,
i stand here,
through it all.

I won't give in,
i won't back down,
you don't control me,
i am my own.

you best step down,
or you will fall,
i won't be there,
to help you up.

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[MetalShopGurl]

well i didn't like them. so i got rid of them.

[Rose Tyler]

What happened to the final 4 lines? ;p
Great job sweetie(:

**EDIT**
Alright. It's still great without them :)