What's Happened???

What's Happened???

A Poem by Visente Melchor
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Since I came back from Boot Camp my creativity has just left... I can't say what I want because it's hard to put into words I can't write a poem, make a song, or create a picture anymore... 08242014

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What happened to my bright lights???
I started off so bright and now I have dimmed...
Music, Photography, Art, and Poetry collided, had fights...
They would always merge in my mind and now what's happened???
I know it's still in me somewhere lingering wanting to be photographed, painted, sung or written...
I know it's crawling in me around me wanting to merge yet again...
Why can't I understand what's happened???
I used to be so bright and now I've dimmed...
I can still see what lies ahead but it's not as clear as it used to be...
The time is being killed dying away while I stand back and see...
The sea calls my name and I move with it...
I dance and twirl in it...
The rain mocks me hitting my neck every time...
And time continues to flash in stop motion with flashes brighter than the sun reflecting off of a dime...
And the water plays while I stay away and cave into the things I can do but still do nothing of it...
I've caved into a quiet mind that gives the impression that I'm living in my own thoughtless world...

© 2014 Visente Melchor


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Visente Melchor
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a wonderful and quite impressive description of writer's block.
we all have to deal with it.
but we must not stop trying and also, we must not strain our mind, just let the thoughts flow.
it's easier said than done, i know but it is the way.
i loved this poem!
:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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a wonderful and quite impressive description of writer's block.
we all have to deal with it.
but we must not stop trying and also, we must not strain our mind, just let the thoughts flow.
it's easier said than done, i know but it is the way.
i loved this poem!
:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 24, 2014
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Tags: Confused, Teenager, Boot Camp, Creativity, Photography, Art, Song

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Visente Melchor
Visente Melchor

Jacksonville, NC



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I'm Visente Melchor just a regular guy, but am in the Marine Corps... I've had writers block for quite some time, & have found a fellow Marine who has some very inspiring ideas & has motivated me to a.. more..

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