To My Friends...

Something I wrote in my study period.

 

Don't say I'm mad

When you're the one ignoring

Don't say I'm lost

When you're the one asking for direction

Why can't you see

What's in front of your own eyes?

Take a step back, and realise your lies

You are just a selfish hypocrite,

Only seeing what you want to see

Even though it brings mostly pain,

It's something you cannot control.

 

So good luck in life,

I hope you enjoy it

Especially when I leave

Trust me when I say it will be soon

'Cause it's time to get on with my life

And enjoy it while it's here,

Time flies, so just be patient

I hope you learn,

I hope it's not too late.

 

Good bye now,

Never give up on your dreams,

I often wonder if you ponder

Over why I am nice when you can be so cruel

So good luck in life,

I hope it's not too late

For you to learn the difference

Between right and wrong.

 

 

 

MetBySunlight (:

 

Author's Note

Just writing about the way I feel, what's happening in my life right now.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Some people live to cause problems and create lies. Best to stay away from. I like the story in this poem and the logical ending.
"So good luck in life,
I hope it's not too late
For you to learn the difference
Between right and wrong."
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[paradise]

well done it was great

[Rakesh Roushan]

Writing actually what you are feeling makes the poetry lived up and you have quite successfully achieved that here .. Preserve it and keep writing like this ..

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I love this write, This is wonderful. Loved the emotiona poured out!

[Thea]

So much emotion in this poem...Great work! :)))

[x0void]

wow..nice work..many can relate to this.

[paparapapa]

I loved it. But i think it should be "To My Frienemies" :)) Kidding. It's just that you really can't call them friends if they're selfish hypocrites. Anyway, I loved how you wrote it. It really portrays the bitterness that you are feeling right now. Oh and i liked how the poem stays light and simple but conveys a lot of emotions. Keep it up! ;)