What If? -Verse One-

What if you talked to me,

I might answer you.

 

What if you called me first,

I could say you cared.

 

What if you gave me a hug,

I would do the same to you.

 

Why must I do them first?

Reviews

[Vito XYZ]

Yes I sometimes think why must I say to someone "I love you", why even though they're waiting for it can't they say it first. If they could I would have more strength to protect out bonds, but If I choose to do so it more like me trying to keep they by my side, I don't want to do that.

Yes we are similar in many way, would you like to chat about anime sometime, indepth like reviewing someone's work

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Really lovely writing!
Keep it up!
Do you read mine too Anguish and She...
God bless you...
Lucky!

[azlamalo]

Wow..this is awesome! I love it. No one likes to initiate

[Corvus]

Beautiful. Full of emotion that is condensed in to a short verse. As a poet, that is much more enjoyable to read, at least for me. Keep it up.

[Antonio Valentino]

Well someone has to. The type of person who goes first is the kind who normally goes through life without the burden of, no regrets. How much love is never known, for the lack of a little courage? Be the first. Magic usually happens, with one simple smile.

Very nice Neeeks!
Antonio

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

because only you know what you really want from life.......smile......short yet leaves one to wonder......good technique

[Coyote Poetry]

A sweet and kind poem. I believe we need to walk slow and easy into friendship and relationship. Always test the person. A lot of story tellers and abusers. I like the feel of hope and possibility. A excellent poem.
Coyote