Winter Wonderland One-ShotA Story by Neeeks!This is a random one-shot I wrote based on a picture I was given in my afterschool activity group, known as Ink Bandits at my school, and I figured I'd put it up because it's different from what I normally write. Hope you enjoy, and please tell me what yoAs we walked down the twisting pathway in the park, I looked around, taking in every aspect. My niece, who walked next to me was smiling, jumping in her mothers footsteps left in the snow that crunched underfoot. I loved the first snow of the season. It always smelt crisp and our breaths always lingered in the air for a moment before fading.
“Look mommy,” she said. “I’m a dragon.”
My sister smiled, along with the rest of us in the group. I remember when I was her age; I would always do the same thing. We all looked up as a few birds landed on a branch, soft cooing sounds escaping their beaks as they tilted their heads from one side to another, making the snow fall to the ground. There was a solid thump as the snow collided with the ground, throwing up a small cloud of the light snow that rested on the frozen.
“How about you make a snow angel,” I suggested.
“Only if you make one,” my niece said as she grabbed my hand.
I allowed her to pull me off the path and under a large tree, the branches going in every direction possible, covered in snow here and there. As we laid in the snow and made ourselves a snow angel, the others were watching, smiling, before they decided it was time to carry on.
“But I want to stay here,” my niece said as her smile turned into a pout.
“Come on,” I said as I brushed the snow off of us. “There’s hot chocolate waiting for us back at the house."
Her smile returned in an instant and she grabbed my hand again, pulling me towards the rest of the family.
“What are we waiting for,” she exclaimed. “There’s hot chocolate!”
We all laughed as she started to run down the path, us jogging after her. The first snow of the seasons was great, but so was a large cup of hot chocolate, maybe with a marshmallow or two. © 2009 Neeeks!Featured Review
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4 Reviews Added on November 17, 2008 Last Updated on September 29, 2009 AuthorNeeeks!Pine Ridge, SDAboutHello, the name's Echo, but my friends refer to me as Neeeks, Echo-Neko, Echo-chan, Neko or Neko-chan... You get the point. I'm twenty-one, a vegetarian and have been writing for almost nine year.. more..Writing
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