Breath

A Poem by Meshalini

Love aroma surrounds me

Breath feels beautiful

Floating in my heart

Owning mesmerizing smile

I saw you

Through my deep breath

© 2019 Meshalini

Author's Note

Honestly, I'm not really interested in love...what about you?

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Coyote Poetry

Wow dear Meshalini. You said everything needed in the poem. No wasted words. I liked the energy leading to the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

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3 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.

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Added on December 3, 2019
Last Updated on December 3, 2019
Tags: love

Author

Meshalini

Malaysia

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