What I See

What I see in the conflict countries...

I do not see Gods,

Only beast.

I do not see angels,

Only devils.

I do not see protection,

Only dangers.

I do not see people,

Only dead bodies.

I do not see buildings,

Only destruction.

I do not see the books,

Only guns.

I do not see security,

Only war.

I do not see the light,

Only darkness.

I do not see the future,

Only end.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Ardra Nair]

its quite interesting akka...thats what we see

[Meshalini]

haha...thank you...

[Jasbir Kaur]

Great thoughts. I appreciate

[Meshalini]

Thank you so much...

[Coyote Poetry]

I do understand this poem.
"I do not see the future,
Only end."
The above lines. I wonder what did this generation leave for the children? Me and you must be the fusion to open eyes and teach concern, kindness and love. A single foot into the lake. Can create a movement that can turn to a hurricane of hope. Thank you Meshalini for sharing the powerful poetry.
Coyote

[Meshalini]

Yes..I too agree with you..
Thank you Coyote...

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Meshalini.

[mou]

you have portrayed the darkness that has captured the mind of a person who lives in those countries..
it is vibrant and straight forward about its intention and message toward the reader..
nice work-done....!

[Meshalini]

Thank you very much, mou

[iamshadowine]

The truth is being highlighted amazingly! Wonderful job done here....
Keep writing😊

[Meshalini]

Thank you very much....

[Akshita]

The poem is so very touching ! It forces you to think about what must be happening to the people who live in such countries.

[Meshalini]

Thank you so much friend....