Sorry For Saying Thank You Sisters

An example of true and great friends.

Childhood life,

Full of enjoyment.

But not for me,

Because it full of tears.

Sadness is usual for me.

It is like my best friend.

No one cares about my life,

But that wasn't the end.

I found two great human beings.

I became friends with them.

I flew with feelings of joy without wings.

I saw who really I am.

Even we were separate by the great Indian ocean,

we always together in our heart.

I'm afraid to tell my secret to anyone,

But they are the only people who knows my past.

Sandra and Ardra,my lovely sisters.

I was very lucky to have friends like them.

They both are also a wonderful writers,

Who wrote my future with full of happiness.

We promised to not say the word 'Thank you' again.

But I have to do that.

I want them to be with me forever,

Until the end.

Thank you so much to Sandra and Ardra for being such a wonderful friends of mine.

Love,

Meshalini.

Author's Note

Just read it...

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

This is the most beautiful poem anyone can write for their friends. I liked it.

[Meshalini]

Thank you...

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome

[Ardra Nair]

oh! thank you so much akka... you'll always be my best friend! but please don't forget me when you grow. Please go through this poem when you grow up and so then you will remember us! I will never forget you.... you are a great,helpful,loving and caring sister.... YOU are a good writer as well....and you sing well and draw well :) :) :) Will never forget this love....

[Meshalini]

Ahh...thank you and I promise that I will never forget you....

[Ardra Nair]

U r always welcome akka...!!!

[Akshita]

It is a really pleasant read! : )

[Meshalini]

Thank you....

[M P Ramesh]

meshalini,

It is a revisit. Can we say such a GOOD BYE to all past. In writing...i mean creative writing the options are abundant an d the writer can utilise it in its maximum. The emotions can not dictate the work ...of course. I also admit. The hindsight is the matter. There appears no past...no present....no future. The writer is inside a globe ..... an onlooker to the actions and reteller of events...FATE... no choice after having become a permanent member of the CLASS.


EXCELLENT

Carry on..........

M P Ramesh

[Meshalini]

Thank you so much M P Ramesh...
I'm really happy that you spent some minutes to read my work and reviewed it...

[Riddhi]

I can understand your feelings Meshalin..You talked about Sandra Nair,right????She is one of my best friends too...What is your age???because you talked about your teachers in about me...I am a 15 year old Indian girl can I get the privilege of becoming your friend..Nice writing...

[Meshalini]

Thank you so much riddhi for review my poem...
I'm 17 year old girl from Malaysia...and yes I talked about Sandra nair and her sister...

[Sami Khalil]

This wonderful tribute tells me that friendship transcends borders and cultures to embrace humanity at its roots. May it lasts forever...:)..................

[Meshalini]

Thank you so much for review my poem with your wonderful words...

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...............

[Lee]

sorry to ask you who are these 2 girl??
better if you give a meaningful intro of them too as this poem seems to be more about them than your past life,,,,,,,,,,,,
but anyway i get it a bit and it is going well,,,,,,,,,,

[Meshalini]

They are my very best friends from India... I dedicated this poem for them,that's why I wrote the good things they have done to me.....anyway thank you so much for your words...Lee

[Lee]

welcome MM

[mou]

what a beautiful poem!!
it has a sorrow and personal feelings..but it is really very fortunate to have friends like them..
yes I too read many writings of Sandra and when you sent me friend request , I instantly recognized you by your profile picture, that I saw in her write..
and you are too beautiful to respect their love with such a beautiful write..
Nice to meet with you, friend :)

[Meshalini]

Thank you so much Mou for your beautiful words....they are my very best friends..and I love them so much....I wrote this poem for thank them for all they do for me.....

[mou]

and you are most welcome :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A hopeful and beautiful poem. We need friendship to maintain our sanity and stay hopeful. Hard to walk alone. I like the thankfulness and positive feel of your words and thoughts. Thank you Meshalini for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Meshalini]

Thank you so much Coyote,they both are changed my life and for that I wrote this poem. They are at India and I'm at Malaysia. Even we were ever met before this,they help me alot.

[Coyote Poetry]

I have been helped often by kind people. We need people who will listen and pay attention to us. We must return the favor.

[Meshalini]

You are right..thank you