Who Am I?

Who Am I?

A Poem by Meshalini
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A short description about myself

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Who am I?
I asked to my name
It said 'Meshalini'
I don't think everyone calls me with this name
I said no
Who am I?
I asked to my parents
They said 'You are our daughter'
I don't believe in their words
I said no
Who am I?
I asked to my friends
They said 'You are our friend'
I don't trust them
I said no
Who am I?
I asked to my nationality
It said 'Malaysian'
I don't know whether I'm an Malaysian or not
I said no
Who am I?
I asked to my God
It said 'You are a Hindu'
I don't know the names of all my God
I said no
But finally
I got my answer
Who am I?
I asked to my heart
It said 'You are an simple human being'
I saw myself as an human being
I said yes

© 2019 Meshalini


Author's Note

Meshalini
Read this and try to understand me.

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don't expect us to be who you want
we are who we are don't try to change us i loved it and i understand how you feel, we live in a world that thinks that what we feel or want isn't important at all, that we should be perfect but we are not machines
thank you for writing i loved it

Posted 7 Years Ago


Meshalini

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your time to read it...
I love the last lines. This is such a powerful and good poem! So well written!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Meshalini

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much..
strong lines!
I can feel through the depth of your heart...
we all are human beings and yes, equal!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Meshalini

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much...
Great words. In a powerful poem. Well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


Meshalini

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much Joshua..
Lovely my friend. Well I know you have a very big heart.

Blessings

El

Posted 8 Years Ago


Meshalini

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much Elmarie...for your lovely words...
wow !!! nice question "who am i ?"
i like it ...
keep it up

Posted 8 Years Ago


Meshalini

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much friend.. Keep supporting me...
Every life had value. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. Good to have met you.
Coyote


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Meshalini

8 Years Ago

Thank You so much Coyote. I'm happy to meet you....
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome and good to have found you and your good words and thoughts.

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Added on June 5, 2016
Last Updated on June 20, 2019

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Meshalini
Meshalini

Malaysia



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