Dear Universe

Some questions and thoughts I have for the universe

dear universe
i have a lot of questions
do you mind if i ask a few?

what will the weather be tomorrow?
it’s not really important
but i’d like to know

will i get a good grade on my test?
this feels very important
i know it’s probably silly

will things get better?
that’s probably too vague
my bad

if you could give me one piece of advice
what would it be?
i don’t like being blind

dear universe
lend me a hand?
life keeps going and going
and i could use a little advice
can i ask you a question?

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Dear Universe, me again
i still have a lot of questions
but that’s okay

it rained
and i didn’t anticipate it
so it got soaking wet, it was fun

i did get a good grade
but it doesn’t really matter
life doesn’t depend on grades

some things got better
some didn’t
i was right about being too vague

if you could give me one piece of advice
what would it be?
i don’t like being blind

dear universe
i got my answers, eventually
life keeps going and going
and i have more questions
will you answer those too?

Reviews

[Tania Mo]

I don't think to much about things but maybe I should lol. Sometimes Im careless.

[AYVID N]

Some answers would help us along, some would reveal themselves with the passage of time and some answers we're better off not knowing. I loved where you say life doesn't depend on grades. Very well written.

[Em]

thank you!! I think that the universe probably reveals things as necessary, and probably laughs at people for being so stupid so much of the time to be honest

[AYVID N]

Yes, it watches us make absolute fools of ourselves and then expecting it to step in and mend things for us.
You're most welcome.

[Em]

Humans really are silly when you think about it. Do you think we are the equivalent of reality TV or something maybe?

[AYVID N]

If there is a higher power out there then indeed he must find us quite entertaining. :)

[hazy]

Absolutely love this, it’s very pretty and well written. You capture the feeling perfectly.

[roniO]

Hope you get all your questions answered. But sometimes it's better not to know. I enjoyed your poem.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

I love this to bits
Well done beautiful write