VELVET

curtains fall upon the twilight of day

obscuring the sun as it retires for the night
 magic velvet haze warms the crepuscular sky
shining its splendor among the shadows
where lovers tryst to share a kiss.

Reviews

[Vandana Sharma]

such a soothing piece of poetry, calm like night sky:)

[B.J]

A lot said within a few short words creating the shadows of the night

[Kenneth The Poet]

This is nice. Short and sweet, like a piece of cake...red maybe.

Could be blue too...wait, wait, wait...it's black...black velvet.

[Delilah]

I like this! "A lovers tryst"

[Tate Morgan]

oh to be young agin What i would give to be 20 again

[SomeSteve]

Beautiful! I actually see the color as "neil aranda's" Photo just a little further down in time and a tad bit darker. Good stuff!

[NeiL ArandA]

Mockingbird - I think the color your describing here is Scarlet . Sometimes it comes with arrays of purplish to velvet and scarlet red. Its amazing you have described it like a drawing curtain... I like your avatar name ~ The Lonely Sparrow.

[Ruth]

Ohh, nice!! I loved this...sensually inviting and thought provoking, awesome imagery hon x

[jacob erin-cilberto]

here it is a hazy shade of winter...in the poem...it is the color of passion.

i like your short pieces...there is much more impact in fewer words.

[Trace]

Easy, it's the color of love.

Nice,

Trace