ANCORA

in tunnels below
madmen file as a privilege
dining at its best

Reviews

[Allen Smuckler]

Great. Though not a haiku per se (doesn't need to be classified anyway)..I still would add a semi colon after the second line...just one man's opinion. I think it would give the final line a little more potency.
Nice work, MB
allen

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

really good imagery- it captures this poem's mood as well!

[khalid]

short but nice

[Mark]

'dining at its best' mmmm...

[mandy]

you give us a glimpse into a world that none want to experience,,,thanks for sharing...