Trying To Take My Last Breath

The poem describes being knocked down,and struggling to get back up.

                                                                             It was late at night

I had given up,I had lost my might

On the verge of death

Trying to take my last breath

I found a picture of you

I swear this is true

I remembered how much I loved you

So I forced myself up 

And I cried

Because I had f*****g lied

Too much

S**t...this is too much

Im just a kid

Oh dear god I repeat Im just a kid

Please let me live

I can no longer stand

Without your gentle hand

I no longer have a plan.

Damn.....

Reviews

[Matching Socks]

Whoa, intense and emotional.
Feels so raw, love it.
Well done.

[Eric]

Feels guttural and real - nice!