I Lied

I Lied

A Poem by Mercutio
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This is a longer poem about a man who is missing his ex girlfriend

"
 She cried
And I lied
But this is a story of a clown
There is never suppose to be a frown
But Im in torture 
Because I still love you
And I no longer can I know you
I have lost my youth
But I gained the power of truth
Yet im still missing you
Sometimes I hate 
This tragic fate 
I have chosen
because now I am frozen
In a new found depression
and I can only hope for a repression 
Yet you inspire me
To follow my desires
and no longer be a liar
I love you,but I can not  stay 
at your bay  for the rest of my days
One Day I may be able to stay at your bay
Until then I must 
Learn to trust 
from this dust
I have been left in
So mabeye the Ashes will one day 
be in the trash and the world
will be ours.

© 2014 Mercutio


Author's Note

Mercutio
Any advice is needed

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Besides some grammar fixes/most likely they're just typos, I like it. Lots of pain in this poem, and everyone can relate to pain of some sort. I like the end, about "the world will be ours"
Good write

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mercutio

10 Years Ago

Thank you.

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Tags: Love, Sorrow, Lies

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