Bestfriend poem vote

Please leave a vote on which you think is better to be used as a gift for a very close friend.

Bestfriend Option #1

This is for my best friend

The one who has had struggles

You know im here till the end

Here to keep eachother out of trouble

This is for my greatest pal

We help eachother through it all

You always boost my Morale

You make me stand tall

This is for the best person

The greatest one i know

When either of us is nervous

Think back all those years ago

Just lock with my elbow

I will block every blow

Bestfriend Option #2

Do you remember when we first met?

There were some things you didnt know

I was falling, you were my safety net

You saved my from a deadly blow

I remember when we first met

The day I planned to end it all

You completely changed my mindset

You made me Stand Tall

I was beaten and broken

You lifted my from the ashes

some things went unspoken

But, I’m no longer covered in scratches

I should have been dead

You saved my life

No bad thoughts remain in my head

You pulled me away from the knife

It was after that I realized

That I wasnt the only one hurting

You thoughts were compromised

We were both searching

We both sought after

Someone to save you and I.

I found you, and my laughter

You found me, and an Ally

You saved my life

I returned the favor

You save me from my strife

I want to be your savior

You make me want to be better

I am no longer Lonesome

I still have your birthday letter

So here is a birthday Poem

Bestfriend Option @3

Jeave suggestions on what to edit, or ideas and formats for a new poem.

Author's Note

Please leave a review saying which option you prefer, and possibly a short reasoning behind it. Thanks :)

Reviews

[Lavi]

I think you should try combing them together. The last one has more length and depth but the first has a resolve in it that I feel needs to be included to get all their worth into a poem. Thank you for sharing.

[Mercer]

I will make the edits, and post the product afterwards. Hopefully i can combine them both with a nice flow

[Lavi]

Best of luck!