Numb

This is about becoming numb towards someones own feelings.

Someone please tell me

Why I cant feel a thing

I miss the happiness

And the flip was Instintaneous

I miss the laughs

Dreaming of petting Giraffes

Wishing i was more like Joel

50 somethin’ years old

But still going with the flow.

Wishing i could find a Partner

Someone for which i can Martyr

Someone to show the Chinks in my Armor

Someone who appreciates my Chivalry

Someone to show my full Creativity

Someone to treat with near Divinity

People are finding their other half

While here slowly rotting away

Just let out a fake laugh

Just waiting for the day

For the numb to leave the Graph

For the Numb to go away.

Author's Note

Any edits are welcome

Reviews

[KokoaKatt]

This is so touching. I absolutely love your writing. I actually just put out my first work on my page about a very similar topic. Your rhymes are top notch, and the whole thing is so relatable. Searching for a partner in life is definitely a need everyone must fill: love. Don't sell yourself short though! We all have those apathetic days but know that when you find the right person, they will appreciate all of your quirks and talents and the way you treat them. I love that you write from your heart. Please don't ever stop writing.

[Mercer]

As long as i can, i plan on writing. I highly appreciate all the support and reviews you are leaving!

[Markus Anthony]

This is a beautiful beautiful poem, it portrays the essence of that stage of life when we just feel apathetic towards everything that keeps on moving and going about everyday. I can also sense that there is lingering feeling of wanting to conform to the realities of life. I like it!