Goodbye

This poem tells the story of a person who has given up and taken their life.

Another day, seemingly bright
Another issue, seemingly slight

Another night, filled with fright
Another lie, "everything's alright"
Another person, testing flight
Another soul, going towards the light
Another girl, who's lost their fight
Another friend, who lost their sight

Another poem from the boy who couldn't write

Reviews

[KokoaKatt]

Wow... this actually made me tear up. To be completely honest, I am depressed and have been suicidal. The fight to keep going is definitely hard, but the pain of losing someone is a horrible thing to have to go through. I'm sorry for your loss. Also, you definitely can write. I just recently started reading your writings, and I have loved every single one so far. I mean sure, we all have room to grow, but you're already doing a hell of a job. Keep up the good work

[Mercer]

This is actually a re-occuring nightmare i used to have, about a certain friend i have who felt the same way. The nightmares have stopped, and my friend is better.

[KokoaKatt]

That's great news, and I'm glad your friend is doing better. You could really do a lot with these poems to help other people become more aware of the struggles that people deal with internally. Really great work, though. I love your writings.

[Mercer]

I'm glad you like my writing, Theres a discord link in my main pages comments if you wanna join :)

[KokoaKatt]

Okay, cool. Thanks :)

[Amy]

I love your poem! Even though it's not that long and it's straight forward, it has meaning and shows great emotion. I can't wait to read more of your work!

[Mercer]

Thank you, I know a lot of my stuff has sad tones, but i am a (Mostly) Happy person :)