Mask
A Poem by Rose
Empty eyes.
Empty soul.
That porcelain is cold.
Heavy tears.
Heavy soul.
That porcelain is cold.
© 2021 Rose
Author's Note
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Just wanted to write something! I haven't written in a while and for that I'm quite sad! Have a great day and thank you for reading!
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Reviews
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I'm so sorry I didn't see this before! I'm always looking out for your new pieces and I somehow missed this. But I'm so glad I checked because this is simply just a great poem. It's short but impactful. I love the rhyming and choosing the word porcelain was great, because that material is always cold and it really makes the reader able to FEEL the poem. I love how it opens up enough to different interpretations, and I certainly know the feeling of being sad about hardly writing, because I rarely did last year, and it's so unsatisfying! I hope you're feeling a bit better about that. (:
I hope I get to read some more of your work soon because not only is it always unique and great, this site feels a little less creative without you. Take care!😃
Posted 3 Years Ago
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RoseWI
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I have a creative mind and tons of ideas I would love to share! Please bear with me, as my grammar may not be all that good. I am still learning after all!
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