Mask

Mask

A Poem by Rose

Empty eyes.

Empty soul.

That porcelain is cold.

Heavy tears.

Heavy soul.

That porcelain is cold.

© 2021 Rose


Author's Note

Rose
Just wanted to write something! I haven't written in a while and for that I'm quite sad! Have a great day and thank you for reading!

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I'm so sorry I didn't see this before! I'm always looking out for your new pieces and I somehow missed this. But I'm so glad I checked because this is simply just a great poem. It's short but impactful. I love the rhyming and choosing the word porcelain was great, because that material is always cold and it really makes the reader able to FEEL the poem. I love how it opens up enough to different interpretations, and I certainly know the feeling of being sad about hardly writing, because I rarely did last year, and it's so unsatisfying! I hope you're feeling a bit better about that. (:

I hope I get to read some more of your work soon because not only is it always unique and great, this site feels a little less creative without you. Take care!😃

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Added on April 19, 2021
Last Updated on April 19, 2021
Tags: mask, cold, fake, sad, lonely, unrealistic

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