One of my fav. poems! Now here, your poetry reminds me a quote, "The beauty`s found in beholder`s eyes." Nice work. Your new work`s kinda ... even very deep & well written... as always ... even well captured into crystal clear imagery than before. Sounds good. You`re improved... at writing more than you already were. Keep it up!
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thanks. Now how to improve more in my writing is the question.
9 Years Ago
Just keep reading as well as writing... throughout the day... each `n every day. You`ll make yoursel.. read moreJust keep reading as well as writing... throughout the day... each `n every day. You`ll make yourself more improve. Well, you`re already improved, but as far as I know, we never stop learning so, yeah... keep improving and learning and writing and smiling all day.
9 Years Ago
So I'm doing it right then, haha, good to know.
9 Years Ago
Lol, Hey.. you ain`t changed. I`m glad, you`re still... the same as you`ve been a year back ;)
9 Years Ago
But I have changed. I'm just... me suppose.
9 Years Ago
Have you? Well, to me... I think, you`re still same. Oh... yeah, you ain`t changed, but improved. An.. read moreHave you? Well, to me... I think, you`re still same. Oh... yeah, you ain`t changed, but improved. And... you still love being intriguing which I love `bout you. (smiling)
I was always intriguing and I can only hope I've grown even more intriguing hahaha. You know what I .. read moreI was always intriguing and I can only hope I've grown even more intriguing hahaha. You know what I really love? I love being intrigued I like it when my mind has a... challenge. I've changed Cid though I'm not completely aware of how but I can feel it.
9 Years Ago
Umm.. you`re changed? Well, okay... may be, you have changed. But not to me. To me, you are still ki.. read moreUmm.. you`re changed? Well, okay... may be, you have changed. But not to me. To me, you are still kinda fascinating which`s way enough to make us both smiley... with time. (Smile). Oh by the way, yeah... May you go more intriguing with time.. as you grow up more! ;)
One of my fav. poems! Now here, your poetry reminds me a quote, "The beauty`s found in beholder`s eyes." Nice work. Your new work`s kinda ... even very deep & well written... as always ... even well captured into crystal clear imagery than before. Sounds good. You`re improved... at writing more than you already were. Keep it up!
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thanks. Now how to improve more in my writing is the question.
9 Years Ago
Just keep reading as well as writing... throughout the day... each `n every day. You`ll make yoursel.. read moreJust keep reading as well as writing... throughout the day... each `n every day. You`ll make yourself more improve. Well, you`re already improved, but as far as I know, we never stop learning so, yeah... keep improving and learning and writing and smiling all day.
9 Years Ago
So I'm doing it right then, haha, good to know.
9 Years Ago
Lol, Hey.. you ain`t changed. I`m glad, you`re still... the same as you`ve been a year back ;)
9 Years Ago
But I have changed. I'm just... me suppose.
9 Years Ago
Have you? Well, to me... I think, you`re still same. Oh... yeah, you ain`t changed, but improved. An.. read moreHave you? Well, to me... I think, you`re still same. Oh... yeah, you ain`t changed, but improved. And... you still love being intriguing which I love `bout you. (smiling)
I was always intriguing and I can only hope I've grown even more intriguing hahaha. You know what I .. read moreI was always intriguing and I can only hope I've grown even more intriguing hahaha. You know what I really love? I love being intrigued I like it when my mind has a... challenge. I've changed Cid though I'm not completely aware of how but I can feel it.
9 Years Ago
Umm.. you`re changed? Well, okay... may be, you have changed. But not to me. To me, you are still ki.. read moreUmm.. you`re changed? Well, okay... may be, you have changed. But not to me. To me, you are still kinda fascinating which`s way enough to make us both smiley... with time. (Smile). Oh by the way, yeah... May you go more intriguing with time.. as you grow up more! ;)
"And she tucked herself away in a corner, quite foreign to the crowd around her and all that kept racing through my head is that the best kind of beauty is the kind that is mostly ignored," -Christoph.. more..