My heart

I fell in love once,

And then again.

She had his eyes,

Heart broken I knew

I'd never see beauty the same way again,

She smiled. 

Reviews

[Cid]

Now, this poem makes me emotional especially it's ending. I hate when some bad people hurt the heart of good people ... but I can't change the world, no one can change the world until they don't learn to change their thinking first...cause, the hurt comes out from the bad thinking of mind and to make it into postivity ... we gotta think positive and which's became a very tough task to us because we're all new age and mostly the new age wants joy, they don't care of heart feelings.

[Meraki]

It's not sad, the woman she had a child, a daughter who had has her father's eyes. The mother as she holds her newborn knows she will never see anything more beautiful in her life. One of the "happiest" poems I've ever written to be honest.

[Cid]

Ah! Okay, now I got the concept! I think, you should've written in author's note that because it'd be cool to understand the concept ...anyway, yeah, that's a very cool concept. I liked the poem and the theme you came up with! :)

[Meraki]

Thank you :)