Reality

The beasts are civilized,

We are machine. 

Reviews

[Pax]

The beasts are civilized,
We are machine.

There is a deep value upon reading this short piece.

I believed that we are all beast, animals just civilized by our intellectual value.

I believed we are just like machine, who put everything in life in order. Rules and regulation we follow. We are the prisoners of our own choices. That is the machine like principles.

[Meraki]

Yes that's it exactly! Thank you Pax, your review means a lot.

[Pax]

you are most welcome :)

[Cid]

Yeah, In this today's bad world, people're really a beast and they don't have feelings to understand the feelings of others so yeah, this poem's showed some kinda truth of new age bad people.

[Meraki]

Yes, they are.

[Cid]

The crime and the violence's been uplifting day by day ..little by little in the world and the reason behind is nothing but the "Negativity" of the people's mind that's forcing 'em to do what their minds want 'em to not heart.

[Meraki]

"The demons made me do it!" they all cry.

[Cid]

What happened, Meraki???
Are you well??? :/ Did anybody hurt you??

[Meraki]

No, it's the cruelty I see that hurt me. Each time there seems to be an excuse for such harshness, it started to get to me.

[Cid]

Yeah... your right, sometimes, me too think the same when I see the cruelty of people. Hey, you should write something big on it with the prints!

[Meraki]

What prints? You mean the book?

[Cid]

Print means printing ...like paste some pics with poems or books if you want to. But What I'd meant that you should write some thing big like a lengthy poem on it with printing because it's a real concept and everybody'd love to read it with the pics.

[Meraki]

Oh I see what you mean. I kind of did if I remember correctly in A Rant. No pictures though I wanted to leave this open to interpretation.

[Cid]

Ah! As you wished! It's looking awesome either so, keep it as same as it is :)
Just Chillax!

[Meraki]

Hahaha! Yes, Sir!