Conclusion

I've realized I can forget.. 

About food 

About hunger

About you 

About living 

Sleeping 

Hearing

Anything 

I can forget..

About you 

I can forget about what

You put me through

I can forget the lies you told

The hurt you've sewn

I can forget to forget

I can forget to have known

I can forget life

I can forget death

I can forget to exist

Yes I can forget to forget

To live

To breathe

To think

See

Care

Even need

But what would that show?

What would it prove?

I can forget to be indifferent

I can forget to be ignorant

I can forget to be me

Maybe then I'd be

The farce known as free

But for now 

I believe I'll move on

Forget about you
Because you forgot about me

Reviews

[Cid]

Holy-Crap!
I hate watching 'Goddesses' in pain!

Magnificent, Adorable and an out..outstanding poem not even a poem but a 'Heart' that's in pain and is been opened up with fully plain. Words always been the inner feelings of humans to release the pain, the joy everything onto the paper to get outta the stress.

("and you gotta be believing, "Last night I learnt a new thing about words and writing that It's a release of our stress and after transforming our stress into the words .. we really feel good. So, I think Writing's must in life.")

"Whether the feelings are good or bad we gotta be jotting into words until we don't feel peace."
This write's been one of the best piece of writing in mah reading. This poem comes when you were in much pain, the pain that someone gives you with whom you loved once a time without an intention of playing a game...but he broke your smooth heart and put you into the world of pain from where you wanna get outta without blame and 'Cid' hates seeing you in pain so forget about him who chewed ya up as insane .. now keep #twinkling you beautiful one, you gotta be shining as same as a #Sun :)

Rating : ~105/100~
Note : "love always gives a light, a light that brighten the life where loved ones enjoy the time but sometimes love hurts the heart with the passage of time but love's really love that keeps the two souls in one as same as a beat does beat into an everyone's heart!"

So, Keep loving! keep laughing!
Keep chuckling! Keep lighting!

Keep twinkling you prettiest, Meraki!

[Meraki]

Thank you Cid. I appreciate your kind words.

[Cid]

The pleasure is all mine dear one. Its always a greatest thing to read your stuffs. Your write very well. Keep writing!

[Tam Warink]

Well, this one is very good in my opinion (for what that's worth.) This pivot point has one minor problem:

The hurt you've sewn (did you mean sew or sow?)
I can forget to forget (um, that would be remembering, right?)

Too many "I can forget" thingies ... my eyes just skipped over them and went to the line endings; perhaps ellipses or something. It reads fast anyway. The ending is great!

100 forgotten forgets

[Meraki]

Oh now I'm confused sew but in the past tense and yes it would mean remembering. I realized that too after I posted it. Thank you you're so kind.

[Tam Warink]

Yes, "sew" is (normally) associated with the stitching together of garments while "sow" is related to planting seeds in the ground. ..just trying to be helpful. These words, homonyms, frequently throw everyone off kilter. No biggie.

[Meraki]

Ahh ok then. Well yes it is sew. Every thread of pain was stitched in meticulously one by one. But either one could work.