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A Story by Mena

Where am I?


I can hear my voice echoing in my head. The need to run has disappeared and something inside of me tells me I’m… home?


A feeling of warmth takes over me and I hear a dangling sound followed by footsteps running down stairs. The most beautiful Labrador comes running towards me, I can tell he is still a baby even though his size could fool someone that doesn’t know dogs, and he has chocolate fur and deep hazel yes. At this point I am really happy I’m good with dogs.


“Hey boy!!  Aren’t you gorgeous??”


I reached over to read his name off of the dog tag on his collar. I read out loud:


“Louie”


I stare astonished at my nails and hands. As I am doing this and the name slips out of my mouth Louie jumps and pushes me to the floor with his front paws. So, where am I? Why is this dog so friendly with me? And, when did I get my nails done???
A thousand more questions rush through my head when I see the 5inch black pumps on my feet and the grey skinny trousers trapping my legs all the way down to my ankles.


“Honey?! Is that you?


A voice I have never heard before. I stay still on the floor, not moving a muscle and Louie and I exchange glares.


“Isa? Baby?”


She knows my name. How does she know my name? Who is she?!

© 2012 Mena


Author's Note

Mena
I started this story as a follow up to one of my poems. The idea jumped in my head and hasn't left me so giving this a try. I don't know if it will stay a story and grow into a book, we'll see.
p.s: the poem I am talking about is "New Beginning", you can find it in my writings)

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This is crazy! Way cool though, good work! Very intriguing.



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12 Years Ago

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Mena
Mena

Lima, Lima, Peru



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Hi, my name is Mena (actually it is Ximena but Mena is a lot easier and also how I sign my work). I would like to say I am a writer but I still haven't been able to pin point that one when I speak ab.. more..

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