In my own skin

In my own skin

A Poem by Mena

Every one of my body-cells scream her name,
every inch of my skin feels her presence.


Who would have thought I’d be where I am today?
who would have thought things would be so different…


I have surrendered to you without even putting up a fight
I have given you me without feeling like I’ve lost myself


Even if our story turns,
even if our paths part into different directions

I know...

I know I will stand in front of her


My eyes will meet hers,
my fingers will touch the depths of her soul,
my lips will explore her skin and count every freckle,
like a satellite explores a constellation of stars..


When I’m with her the world stops and there is only us,
when I’m with her heart skips beats like a child on a prairie…


She makes me feel safe,
safe in my own skin…

© 2012 Mena


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Very lovely piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so beautiful. It's raw and so true and I feel completely connected to how you feel. I love the line,"I have surrendered to you without even putting up a fight." I have felt exactly the same way- effortlessly beautiful. To me it seems like at times, you're talking to her and others you're talking to yourself. I like that!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is beautiful. It made me smile, to think that someone can still feel this way about another person. Lovely job, gorgeous. x

Posted 12 Years Ago


There are places where the language differences come through, but an overall good work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 10, 2012
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Tags: love, poem, poetry, long distance

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Mena
Mena

Lima, Lima, Peru



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