F A L L I N G

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Snow falls crisp on my face
Thoughts swirl, free flow to my heart
I have always loved you.
Maybe more than life itself

 

The snow falls on my cheeks
I remember all the times
I smiled for you
It hurts to dream again.

 

But today I will be strong for you

And when the snow falls

Caressing my frozen tears

I look up towards the heavens

I wonder where you are
And how you feel

 

The day is coming when I am older
I don’t know if I’ll be over this
So I just lay
In my utter confusion
Upon this snow
That falls, and falls

Reviews

[Lina Lynn]

great imagery and great writing. Keep up the good work

[HorrorOfOurLove]

yes, this poem is amazing. i feel the pain your going through too, it is very well expressed in this poem.
great job keep writing

[strange_gurl]

beautiful poem,the memory of our lost beloved ones just hurts so much but we need to be strong...the idea of this poem is very interesting

[Seriana]

This is a most spectacular write. I felt the emotion instantly. And the reference to snow is subtly perfect, in my mind. Such a cleansing mystery is it....Much the same as love lost, or slipped away. Wonderful write. Graceful and tender, with loads of feeling. Welcome to WC :)