The sense of touch

A short romance poem written by Melvin

You touched my hear
Touched my soul
I felt your power sorround me
felt my world spinning away
Then there was only the two of us
caught up in a magical sphere
Where touch was everything

My whole body tingled with awareness
and we were together as one
Joined flesh to flesh
Heart to heart
You carried me to the brink
Leaving me teetering on the edge

You touched my heart
Touched my soul
A touch so heavenly sent
A touch that vulnerated my heart
The sense of touch

Author's Note

As a starter,i may not be perfect.Criticism and appreciation of my work are accepted.That's the only way i will learn.Thanks to all my reviewers in advance

Reviews

[Samantha Jenkins]

This was amazing.

I have NOTHING bad to say.
Sorry, really new to this at the moment and only just began writing so critiquing will be hard.