Just Seeing You

Okay..Here's like...I JUST NOW WROTE THIS! so....Yeah...It's romancy

Just seeing you,

makes me want to wish I knew.

 

Just seeing you,

Makes my face turn not red but blue.

 

Just seeing you,

Makes me think will I make do?

 

Just seeing you,

Makes me realize how much my heart is true.

 

Just seeing you,

Just seeing you...

Just by seeing you....

Makes the world

 

Stop.

Author's Note

What do ya think?

Reviews

[Shadow Kat]

Love the repitition, makes me think mystery and wonder. Excellent.

[Melody]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

[Shadow Kat]

Loved it!

[Melody]

Lol good! :D

[Maan]

I think. . Let me think. . :) aa h Yeah! I think that its a really nice poem. :) lol. A part from joke, its a good poem. Finite but a lot expressed still.

[Melody]

:D Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[Maan]

:) :)

[Owlgirl]

Nice repition, it's amazing!!!!! Gorgeous poem!

[Maan]

agreed. :)

[Melody]

Thanks! :)

[deepblue04]

I like the repition it kind helps the readers out a little. Good job!

[Melody]

Thank you! :)

[nigrum homonculus]

oh damn this was great! you did very well. especially the end. it was very strong. well done!

[Melody]

Thank you! :D

[Harley (arbiter)]

It was cool. I like the repitition. Nice job.

[Melody]

Thank you!