His Burning Wrath of Anger

This isn't about a person, but the world.

He's uncontrollable.
I can't handle is yelling and screaming.
His breathing is uneven as he hits her cheek.
He turns around and slaps me too.
What did we do?
My fright is uncontrollable also.
But it's all here for a reason.
Can anyone stop his burning wrath of anger,
Before he ruins and discriminates the whole universe?
What will happen when his life stops?

Wishing he'd stop what he's doing I yelp and flee.
I run and run.
My adrenaline to get away is burning like hell.
If anyone stops him.
It'll be me.
He's killed her.
She's bleeding out covering the floor in bright red liquid.
His never ending adrenaline is stronger than mine.
But mine is a living,burning, churning, waiting for the kill,hell.
I shall stop his burning wrath of anger.
With my fiery like hell adrenaline.
Only I can stop him.
Only I can destroy his burning wrath of anger,
That caused her and I to live in hell.
His hell.

There is the burning wrath of flames and smoke,
that blows around me.
I scream.
His burning wrath of anger,
Is here once again.
For the very.
last bit of living hell shall never live again.
And tears run down her cheek.

Author's Note

December 22, 2010.

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Reviews

[shanara renee]

Beautiful

[nigrum homonculus]

the emotion in this is excellent. the imagery was amazing also. the more i read the more anger i began to feel and actually started reading faster. a very intense and perfectly executed poem. well done

[Owlgirl]

Wow, strong emotions and I love the imagery and rage that seems to come from a burning sadness within the depths and folds of this poem. Very well written and spoken. Amazing poem.