Pandora's Tears

Please read and review! Fresh from editing!

Rain and window panes,

tears roll down a stone cold face,

Look for love in an empty rose

Crying is a tool to relive what's real

and smiles in a world paired with white pearls.

Hope resides inside the box

with the end of the world 

and desperation in sight.

The weak kill the strong 

in order to feel needed.

All we see is rain on window panes

and tears roll down a stone cold face.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Mazie Tackett]

Come on! It's summer! Where are all the happy stuff? Love it, but it kind of bums the mood.

[Melody]

Lol. I'm not too good with the happy stuff. It has to be a certain kind of day in order for me to write happy stuff. XP

[Fréyjä Helv..]

A sorrowful poem... a familiar feeling of being so empty and lost...

[Melody]

Exactly how I wanted it to be. Thank you, Helviti.