For The Baby Is Trying To Sleep

Fresh write. Please, read and tell me what you think.

The world is getting louder,

with the parties raging

and the guns firing in the alleyways.

The world is getting louder,

the whispers preaching bigger 

but never gaining for the better.

I need the world to quiet.

I need the world to stop shouting,

and to shut its mouth.

With its nosy media, and the annoying

burst and busts of breaking windows,

for a person who never gets the sleep

with the world, this is where I wish the

living were frozen and the dead were awakening.

The underworld is where the harps will play 

when I walk in through the gates

and the sky is where I cringe and hide 

from a world of pointless laughter and painful sun.

The world is getting louder,

with the crime rates racing

and the life a motive of murder.

The world is getting

louder

louder louder

louder louder louder.

The world is a place where 

an everlasting noise will never stop.

The criticism and the aimed fingers 

like the pitchforks and gallows of the Salem Trials.

If the world would please just quiet quiet...quiet down,

because there is a baby sleeping somewhere in the world

and with this noise it will never learn the meaning

of peaceful dreams and restful rest.

So could everyone please just quiet

for this growing baby is just trying to get some decent sleep.

Author's Note

There is a baby trying to get some sleep. So the parties will slumber and the shots would stop, because there is a baby somewhere in the world, just wanting to know the meaning of peaceful sleep and a night of no nightmares

Please review and tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Trigorin]

Not bad. Simple concept, but you've made it very interesting and kept the stakes high. I think some of your language is a little overwrought in places - it feels like you're trying too hard at times - but really, you've executed this very well. Good work.

[Melody]

Thank you, I appreciate it tons, Trigorin. (Because this is my dream) :)

[Rhea752]

This is truly amazing. To me it illustrates a world losing control of its vices and the baby is a symbol of hope.

[Melody]

:) thank you.

[Bráthair Faolchu]

I think Trigorin and Sam said it all. Well done, Mel:)

[Melody]

Thank you. :)

[Sam Gregory]

Expressed very well, cant really add on to what Trigorin said tbh. This does need to get read :)

[Sam Gregory]

Btw, one of my rapper friends says this is pretty good and u have potential :)

[Melody]

Thank you Sam and rapper friend. :) I appreciate tons!!!

[Sam Gregory]

No problemo :)